Untitled Song please read

[darkoneofpower]

When I imagine you're here,
my suffering goes away
and the smile that's so dear,
on the memories of your face.
This incredibly sick passion
seems to tear me away.
Yet when your image reaches for me
the absence of touch....
brings me crashing down again.

This ache I have won't go away.
The void you laft consumes me.
My passion brings me to hate,
and I start all over again.

When I imagine killing you,
your body gets me off.
Touching your dying face,
my hands just won't stop.

This ache you gave won't go away.
The void you left consumes me.
My passion brings me to hate,
and I start all over again.

When I imagine I go insane,
with a maddness I can't explain.
Ripping through your flesh releaves me,
yet intensifies my hate.

This ache I feel won't go away.
The void you left consumes me.
My passion brings me to hate,
and I start all over again,
it starts all over again,
it kills me all over again,
I die all over again,
I'll love you all over again,
I love you all over again,
I'll kill you all over again.


I wrote this for the band in a comic I had been drawing

[auraki]

That is actually quite excellent .

Awesome job, you got talent!

[Ancient Goddess]

Yeah, and this girl CLAIMS she has no talent on a daily basis...

It flows very nicely and the word choice is great!

[Sephiroth Kaizen]

D1OP, I'm only going to say this because you hear me fuss at you nearly everyday about your writing:

KEEP WRITING YOU DORKUS! You have a talent and deny yourself all the time! When you put your heart and mind to it, you'll get it done! Believe in yourself.

[bushytail]

Man that's good. I liked it!

[Mori'Quessir]

So good! Gosh.. ur amazing! You should definitely listen to Sephiroth.. i agree with her. Oh.. fairy pictures.. SO AWESOME!!! thank u!

[doop]

I'll have to send you some more pictures, I didn't think two was enough