Should I? (stream of thoughts)

[darkoneofpower]

Mother, mother… where am I?
What Is this understanding I am suppose to come to?
How can I become who I am suppose to be without one to accompany me?
Am I wrong to be afraid of the comforts men have gave?
Is wrong for me to act shyly, for me to be foolish or frankly…

Mother, mother I am lost.
I sit her wanting to cry and I can do not.
The world trembles, I feel nothing.
I fall, everyone else remains standing.

Mother, mother, what if I took my own life tonight?
What if I took it with this knife?
Would people morn, and for how long?
How long till the time they will forget me?

Mother, dear sweet mother. I am tired of living.
There is one person I would call, I will not call him.
It is late tonight, and tomorrow is another day… wait tomorrow is here. Mother, dear mother…. Help me.




(just some random thing I decided to post, just throwing this out there you don't need to reply if not wanted)

[Sephiroth Kaizen]

[glow=blue,4,300]Wow, once again from the girl who claims no talent in the writing department. This is awesome D1OP, and it's sad too. I haven't seen a lot of this stuff from you though. I like it nonetheless. [/glow]

[Ancient Goddess]

Yes, easy to follow and good nonetheless. Kinda had a sad tone to it while reading, but it's excellent, darkoneofpower.

Keep this stuff coming!

[Ratatosk]

Wow, that's an excellent poem. Reminds me of a song....I forget..
But anyway, I can see how you address the want to die but resist because of family. And not only that, but the fear of inadequacy.