Just a small poem fragment

[Ratatosk]

Like the title says, it's small. It's unfinished, but I like where it's going.

Why don't you acknowledge that I'm such an angel
That I view the earth from an innocent angle
Though, I have fallen quite a few times down
Thus the darkened halo 'round my crown
Still, purity and love radiate from my inner being
So you can imagine the worldly pain that I am seeing


Upon a second look of it, I have a long way to go on this one.

[darkoneofpower]

I would like to see where you are going with this one.

[godsrighthand]

Umm.........do you think you could get around to adding a little more in a month or two?