random pandi poem

[pandi]

my friend jaime told me to write a poem today.
she wanted me to write one on LJ, so i did.
it was just a quick one. but that's generally how they are right?


as i wonder endlessly through this eternal maze called life
i think to myself
what is the purpose?
what is my role?
what is my reason?
what is my goal?
a poem is a poem
a rhyme, but a rhyme
but what shall i do with my almost endless time?
squander my money
sell my soul
work so hard
so hard for what?
we work
we learn
and we work some more
but for what?
the greater good of our culture
our economy
our people
our fait is what?
the neverending work consumes us
and no one ever really asks for the reason
maybe it's because that reason is doomed to be unknown
maube it's because that reason
is everyone else
i believe that you are here to help others
though you may never notice it
your life impacts upon others
and others upon others
it's a neverending string of stories
of lives connected by a thin red line
one thousand and one nights
forever and a day
a single story
that branches into many
and explains our downfalls
our achievements
and how we are here to help each other
for the greater good of man


okies. done.
what do you guys think?
i have kind of a weird style of my own. so forgive me for that.

[nori]

..........i liked it, im not a poetry fan but thumbs up from over here +100 points

[Animascura]

pandi said:

my friend jaime told me to write a poem today.
she wanted me to write one on LJ, so i did.
it was just a quick one. but that's generally how they are right?


as i wonder endlessly through this eternal maze called life
i think to myself
what is the purpose?
what is my role?
what is my reason?
what is my goal?
a poem is a poem
a rhyme, but a rhyme
but what shall i do with my almost endless time?
squander my money
sell my soul
work so hard
so hard for what?
we work
we learn
and we work some more
but for what?
the greater good of our culture
our economy
our people
our fait is what?
the neverending work consumes us
and no one ever really asks for the reason
maybe it's because that reason is doomed to be unknown
maube it's because that reason
is everyone else
i believe that you are here to help others
though you may never notice it
your life impacts upon others
and others upon others
it's a neverending string of stories
of lives connected by a thin red line
one thousand and one nights
forever and a day
a single story
that branches into many
and explains our downfalls
our achievements
and how we are here to help each other
for the greater good of man


okies. done.
what do you guys think?
i have kind of a weird style of my own. so forgive me for that.

[animascura]

Dear AnG, you see that ^ ? Your board is wiggin out .

what i meant to do:

"i believe that you are here to help others
though you may never notice it
your life impacts upon others
and others upon others
it's a neverending string of stories
of lives connected by a thin red line
one thousand and one nights
forever and a day
a single story
that branches into many"

<3
This was an amazing poem, straight from the heart, understandable, spoke volumes to me. I give it 2 thumbs up. *snaps finger* write on. o.o

[Ratatosk got logged out]

Hey that's an excellent poem. I agree and repeat with everything anima had to say about it. As long as your poetry conveys what's most important to you, then it is a great success. Like singing, it doesn't matter shit if you have the greatest voice in the world, if you don't sing with soul. You can have a voice wracked with discord and pain. I guess what I'm saying is, who's better known: SATCHMO or pavarotti? What a wonderful world....oh yeaaahh.....

[Rata again]

.... Satchmo = Louis Armstrong, for those who don't know.

Continuing what I was saying... Although we are constantly revising our works and words, you have made the biggest first step in poetry. ^-^ Congrats!