Athildur
Warrior
Chibi Kage Bunshin no Jutsu! :P
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Post by Athildur on Aug 8, 2005 7:09:14 GMT -5
Well, since I do write a lot, and I crave so much to hear people's comments (I never actually care whether the comments are positive or negative, as long as they have some substance aka reason why it is good/bad). right, now, at the moment, I unfortunately only have one work of writing online, and I don't really do poetry (trust me when I say that I can write poetry. On several occasions, I have done so, and people generally believe I am good, but to tell you the truth...I hate writing them. I never feel like writing one...If I want to complain about something, I'll write a few thousand words on it as a short story ). This one story I have can be found here. This is on fanfiction.net, and thus is fanfiction. The fanfiction is about...well, go see for yourself. Some poeple might dislike the show it's based on, some people might dislike the topic of the story...either case, please read and tell me what you think about the story. If you don't like the topic, then you don't, just don't tell me the entire thing sucks because of the topic...I mean, there's more to a story than the topic, right? In the future, when I add more stories, I'll just put em in this post. (Fanfiction stories are simply added to my fanfic account, so the link will suffice, but enough others I'll probably post on some other writing forum). Enjoy reading ^^.
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Post by Sephiroth Kaizen on Aug 16, 2005 11:04:31 GMT -5
LOL, I'll check it out. It just might take me a minute because I have a very bad problem with sitting still for extended periods of time... which is why I make a very limited apperance in the Deep Thoughts thread. >_>
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Athildur
Warrior
Chibi Kage Bunshin no Jutsu! :P
Posts: 99
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Post by Athildur on Oct 2, 2005 15:18:57 GMT -5
Ooh, and here some poems I suddenly felt inspired to write...'t was a very good movie I saw about ten minutes before writing this down...and it only took me 5 minutes to find word that rhymed . First Love(?) First love, has to be, awaiting your gentle touch. First love, has to be, Expecting ever so much. First love, has to be, awaiting your warm embrace, First love, has to be, Seeing your soothing face. First love, has to be, Awaiting your sweet, sweet kiss, First love, has to be, Having you is my eternal wish. First love, has to be, From my slumber I awake, First love, coulnd't be, It was a dream, not real but fake. First love, will you ever be? I'm still waiting. Not yet in possession of a name Strong of heart, Soft of touch, Giving love, Ever much. Strong of body, Strong of mind, Caressing me softly, Your face, so kind. Truely beautiful, Both inside and out, Fighting for me, Brave ansd stout. Kissing me gently, Your lips to mine, A rush of warmth, Feels so fine. Oh great love, What to do, If I could only have the strength and courage, To go out there and find you.
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